Ani May Queen

Thanks for your advice, I really appriciate it. But please don't just limit yourself to critiqueing, I'd like to know if you like it or not to. :D Also I ...

Your right about it not seeming to belong in Fantasy...but I'll reserve judgement till the next installment. Otherwise it wasn't that badly written. It does need work though along with ...

Very intresting, like how the narrator is alway changing their mind. It's just like human nature to never be satisfied. The style is very good. It was a little confusing ...

A very nice quick read. I like the style and how you just use simple words to convey the meaning and feel of the poem. Very nice.

Okay, at least now it looks better...

Okay, why in the world didn't the "pre" thing work? :?: It said "Highlighting the entire text and pressing the "pre" button (available under the subject line) will keep any ...